Does Haiku Rhyme

the small crowd erupts

all eyes on the ball which seems

not about to fall

 

Language structures experience. Words are sounds. The poet plays with words to fulfill his desire for a good poem. A good poem after many readings blends into one hyper – sound. The word ecstatic comes to mind.

A sound-narrative (?):  small…ball…fall.

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